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Not bad 
MY feedback is that I think Stark's shirt should have been a different colour so then you could distinguish between his shirt and her hair more, maybe a dark green? Also loose his eyelashes or tone them down as they make him appear more feminime (is that how you spell it?
) and his hands don't look right- maybe if they were more clasped around each other so it seemed like he was trying to stop her wandering off or something?
They kind of look out of proportion to one another. Is that on purpose? (That sounds bitchy, but I don't mean it to be!)
I think if you made some altercations it has the potential to be a very good picture.
One last thing- can I ask what style this is? Your own, or based on a cartoon? Just curious
MY feedback is that I think Stark's shirt should have been a different colour so then you could distinguish between his shirt and her hair more, maybe a dark green? Also loose his eyelashes or tone them down as they make him appear more feminime (is that how you spell it?
) and his hands don't look right- maybe if they were more clasped around each other so it seemed like he was trying to stop her wandering off or something? They kind of look out of proportion to one another. Is that on purpose? (That sounds bitchy, but I don't mean it to be!)
I think if you made some altercations it has the potential to be a very good picture.
One last thing- can I ask what style this is? Your own, or based on a cartoon? Just curious